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by David Jewell
Category: Erotica/BDSM Erotica
Description: To Him Her Transformation from Self-centered to Submissive is Sweet Revenge! Jason Sparks is a police detective fed up with his strong-willed wife Lynnzy's attitude that the sun revolves around her. But in spite of her character flaws, he still loves her. When Carlos Velasquez, a new narcotics detective, tells Jason that his wife used to be a lot like Lynnzy until he discovered the secret for marital happiness: having a submissive wife. Then Carlos takes Jason home and gives him a hands-on demonstration of the joys and benefits of having a wife that is submissive in every sense of the word, including ordering her to service Jason. After witnessing Vanessa's complete submission to her husband and to him, Jason learns about MIST, an organization that teaches women to be submissive. Soon Jason joins MIST and gives it permission to go ahead to mold and change his wife from being self-absorbed to being submissive. Kidnapped by her husband, Lynnzy proves herself to be a challenge. But, although resistive to her training at first, Lynnzy finds herself slowly becoming addicted to sexual submission. To Jason, her transformation from being self-centered to submissive, is indeed sweet revenge.
eBook Publisher: Renaissance E Books/Sizzler Editions,
eBookwise Release Date: August 2007
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Available eBook Formats: OEBFF Format (IMP) [270 KB]
Reading time: 185-259 min.
Jason showered again in the morning. While eating breakfast, he thought about what Carlos had said about changing people for the better. After working on the police department and seeing people at their "best", he had his doubts. Even though he had a degree in social work, he had little hope that people could be rehabilitated. He knew he was cynical. It came with the territory.
He didn't know much about Carlos except that he was a very good street cop and recently promoted to detective. Last night was the first time he had sat down and talked with him outside of detective bureau. On the trip over, he was growing more and more curious about some of his comments last night. He parked in front of Carlos' house a few minutes before ten. "Nice place," he commented when he saw the large ranch house located in the middle of the block. Causally dressed in jeans and a yellow polo shirt that gave just a hint of his muscular build, he knocked on Carlo's front door.
"Good morning, Jason. Come on it."
"Cup of coffee?" he asked after he closed he door behind Jason.
"Yeah, I could use one more cup."
"Take anything in it?"
"No, black will be fine." He followed Carlos into the family room that was next to the kitchen and overlooked the pool in the backyard. He felt a pang of anger that Lynnzy now had their house. While at least, his rental house had a pool, he consoled himself. But it was smaller than the one he had put in shortly after they had purchased their first house.
"Jason, this is my wife Vanessa."
"Good morning. It's nice to meet you." Jason shook her hand while looking into her coal black eyes.
"It's nice to meet you."
"Jason would like a cup of coffee, black. And I'll have another myself. We'll be on the patio."
"Have a seat," Carlos said and pointed to a chair near the square table with a collapsed umbrella in the center of it. "It's just too nice to be inside."
"You can say that again." Jason sat down. He looked around the backyard. "You have done a nice job with the landscaping."
"Thanks." He sat across from Jason.
Jason smiled at Vanessa when she appeared with three cups of coffee on a small tray. With her low cut blouse, he could not help but look at her cleavage when she leaned over to serve the coffee. Such luscious brown mounds, he thought. "Thank you," he remembered to say.
"You're welcome." Vanessa served Carlos his coffee and then sat down between them. Her long black hair glistened in the morning sun. She took a sip of coffee and enjoyed the relative coolness of the morning knowing that it would be in the nineties by noon.
Delicious," Jason said after taking his first sip.
"Vanessa and I have been married for nearly five years," Carlos began.
"I almost made it to seven," offered Jason.
"It seems like a lot of marriages end in divorce for cops. We were headed in the same direction. But we made some changes and we've never been happier."
"What kind of changes?" Jason asked and was obviously interested in their key for a happy marriage.
"First, tell me a little about Lynnzy and why you got divorced."
Jason looked at him and then at Vanessa. He was obviously not comfortable.
"Just give me some basic information. Then I'll share what we did to make our relationship better ... much better."
Jason hesitated. "Okay. We fell madly in love shortly after we met. Lynnzy is a beautiful woman." He looked at Vanessa. "Just like your wife."
Vanessa smiled. "Thank you."
"But she had an attitude. She was very strong willed. I guess being so cute when she was growing up, she got a lot of things that she wanted just by turning on the charm, if you know what I mean."
"Believe me. I do," replied Carlos. He stroked Vanessa's hair.
"I guess I let her manipulate me at first ... using her charms to get me to do what she wanted, when she wanted."
"I know exactly what you mean."
"I do. Vanessa was much the same way at first." He kept stroking her hair. "Tell me more."
"I don't know. Being a cop, you get used to taking control and I do a have strong will myself. I guess I just got tired of being manipulated and having to kiss her ass all of the time. We clashed more and more as time went on. And we were both unhappy so we got divorced."
After a brief silence, Carlos spoke. "I understand. Would you like her back if her attitude was different?"
"Sure. I still love her."
Carlos nodded his understanding. "You and Lynnzy sound just like us when we first got married. Isn't that right, Vanessa?"
"Like Lynnzy, Vanessa was very spoiled. Being as beautiful as she is, she pretty much got what she wanted by just batting her eyes. And when she didn't get her way, there was hell to pay. Like you, I got weary of the constant manipulation. We were both miserable and constantly fighting. To be honest, we were headed for a divorce, too."
"As luck would have it, I ran into a man who introduced me to a group called M.I.S.T. or MIST."
"MIST? I've never heard of it."
"The group is somewhat underground and below the radar. MIST stand for More Intense Sexuality Training. MIST changed our lives."
"How?" Jason leaned forward. He was very interested in learning more.
"Very simply, the group believes in male dominance and female submission. And that really hit a chord with me. I guess cops are dominant by nature."
"We are. We need to be in order to survive on the streets." He looked at Vanessa as he thought about Carlos' comment. "And Vanessa just bought into that philosophy?"
Carlos laughed softly. "No, not at first. In fact, she was dead set against any idea of being submissive. But with education and training, that all changed. She is now completely submissive to me and we've never been happier." He looked into her eyes. "Isn't that right?"
"I've never been happier, sir."
Jason raised his eyebrows in question. "Sir?"
"It's just a small way to keep her mindful that I'm in charge ... that she is submissive to me."
"Oh." He was getting more curious about their relationship and about MIST. "More intense sexuality training. What's that all about?"
Carlos smiled. "It's the goal of the group. When two people understand their roles--one being dominant and the other submissive--the sex is incredible. You don't play games. You don't try and manipulate each other. In our case, I let Vanessa know what I want sexually and she does her best to please me. Of course, I reward her when she does. The results are intense sex for both of us. Like I said, we've never been happier."
"Wow! That sounds fantastic."
"And there are no limits as to what you can ask for?"
"No limits. If I want it, I get it."
"Really?" Jason replied in disbelief.
"Really. Do you need another cup of coffee?"
Vanessa, I'll need another cup myself."
"Yes, sir." She got up to refill their cups.
"All kinds. You said something about training."
Carlos smiled. "The group does offer help in training women to be submissive. And their techniques are very effective."
"Tell me more."
"Why don't I just show you the results of Vanessa's training?" He waited while Vanessa served their coffee. Along with Jason, he took a sip. After Vanessa sat down between them, Carols continued. "Vanessa will do anything that I ask her to do."
"Anything?" Jason was skeptically. He was also very curious and doubtful.
"Yes. She will do anything I want." He stroked her hair. He kissed her on the lips. "Take your top off."
"Yes, sir." Unhesitatingly, she removed her top, folded it and set it on the table.
Carlos smiled over the look on the Jason's face. "She is beautiful, isn't she?"
Jason starred at the brown mounds that were spilling over the cups of her black pushup bra. "Very beautiful." He looked Carlos. "Do you mind if I touch them?"
"No problem." He smiled.
Jason softly caressed the skin of her exposed cleavage. He admired her nearly flawless skin and he appreciated how soft it was. He moved the tip of his index finger over her concealed nipples.
"Mmmm," Vanessa purred as she enjoyed his soft, gentle touches.
"Show him your breasts."
"Yes, sir." Vanessa removed her breasts from the cups of her bra.
Jason paused to admire her dark brown areolae with their thick, long nipples. He moved his finger in a circular motion over the outer edge of her areolae. "You have a great set."
"Thank you. Mmmmm," Vanessa continued to moan. She jutted them out further as her nipples became erect.
"She does get hard," Jason observed as he toyed with her nipples.
"She is very responsive," shared Carlos. From the look on Jason's face, he knew that Jason felt like a kid in a candy store. "Did Lynnzy suck your cock?"
Jason cupped one of Vanessa's breasts. "Yes."
"Did she let you cum in her mouth?"
He looked at Carlos. He was hesitant about sharing that kind of information. But with him holding his wife's breasts, he decided what the heck. "I did once. She didn't like it and I never did again. She would jack me off while sucking it. But she never let me cum in mouth after the first time."
"I see. I bet you wanted to, didn't you?"
"Yeah, I really liked how it felt the first and only time that I did it."
"Do you want to cum in Vanessa's mouth?" he asked.
He looked at Vanessa and back at Carlos. "Are you kidding?"
"No, I'm not kidding. Vanessa will do anything that you or I want this morning. It is as simple as that."
He was taken aback by Carlos' frankness. "Really?" When Carlos nodded, he added. "Of course, I would." He touched Vanessa's soft lips with his index finger. "Who wouldn't want these lips around his cock?"
She knew what was expected. And she felt an erotic tingle over the prospect of sucking Jason's cock. After all, he was good looking and obviously getting turned on. She knelt in front of him.
"You're okay with this?" Jason asked. He was having hard time--no pun intended--believing that Carlos wanted his wife to suck his cock.
"I am without a doubt. I want you to see and experience first hand what the training of MIST can do for a relationship."
"If you stand up, she will do the rest."
When he stood, Vanessa unfastened and lowered his jeans. She wet her lips with her tongue as she lowered his boxers. "Wow," she breathed when his semi-erect cock came into view.
Jason felt uneasy and awkward with Carlos watched his wife taking his penis into her mouth. This was a first for him. "Oh," he breathed as Vanessa's soft lips surrounded the tip. He flinched as her tongue moved across his glans. His cock flexed in her mouth as it rapidly became fully erect.
"She is very oral," shared Carlos. He felt his cock twitch over seeing his wife's submission and unquestioned obedience to him. He took a sip of his coffee.